my flesh reaches out to you as you pass by me
my mouth waters at the thought of your lips
my pulse quickens at the sound of your voice
and your eyes could take me to my knees
Give - I need you - please
Your hand brushing against mine
sends shivers through the core of my being
in close proximity to your body
the heat and energy are magnetic
deep down inside of me, there is a scream,
waiting to come out when you release it for me
Soon, I will need your touch in order to live.....
My heart beats your name and voice
I've known no other feelings like this before
I cannot imagine living the rest of my life without you
I cannot imagine sleeping another night
until we consummate what destiny has in store
It's over for me
I belong to you.
12 comments:
OH My that is beautiful, I felt every word! Awesome
Life longing for itself. Wow - Hot!!!
whew...amazingly beautiful...
Wow. . . that was a beautiful sonnet of love there!
Just lovely - what a great reflection on an otherwise rotten day.
OMG...that shot is amazing. Beautiful.
p.s. Thanks for joining the "gift of jewels" project.
I was going to say "wow" and "amazing" and "beautiful" but everyone beat me to it. But wow. I was actually just skimming blogs in google reader (cuz I'm so far behind dang it) but had to stop and reread this one. Very talented...
That is HOT and sensual and loving. I so like this poem. I want to read it to hubby.
Thank you EVERYONE for your kind words...this was a big step for me, to show my poetry. I have shared alot about myself on this blog, but, I've never really LAYED MYSELF BARE like I did with this poem. Your encouragement made it all worth while. Again, thank you for the LOVE....
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What a magnificent work of art! Very sensual...very real. Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
WOW! That was fantastic! I saw you amongst all those other comments!
Fragrant Muse, thank you, thank you!
Otin,
You're a sweetheart!
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